Narrative Beats + Script

 Below is the narrative beat sheet that I wrote for Jack in the Box, as well as the final script for the voice over. This is already version two, but I'm sure the narrative will have to change more. I've already decided to remove certain story elements, such as the scenes with the 'teacher', who is ofcourse just Edwin's mother in disguise. I think the story can still be told without this element, and although it changes the overall tone a bit, this is to be expected when I can't tell the entire story in the time I have.